Aditi stared at her reflection in the darkened window. It was 2:00 AM. Her desk was a graveyard of crumpled papers and empty tea cups. She was preparing for the UPSC Mains, but she felt like she was shouting into a void.

She had tried generic AI chatbots. She would paste her essay on "Digital Sovereignty," and the bot would say, "Great job! Very informative."

"Useless," she whispered. "Flattery won't get me through the interview."

She opened the SHASANG A.I. portal. She didn't type this time; she uploaded a photo of her handwritten answer. She waited, heart racing.

The response isn't a "Great job." It was a surgical strike.

Logic Gap: You mentioned the DPDP Act but failed to link it to the Right to Privacy judgment of 2017. (-2 marks)

Structure: Your introduction is too wordy. Get to the point in 30 words.

Aditi didn't feel insulted; she felt seen. For the first time in six months, she knew exactly where she was failing. She picked up her pen again. She wasn't just studying anymore; she was sharpening her mind with a coach that knew the "vibe" of the Indian examiner.